Its been while i wrote a new poem since “FaceOff” got published. Today, is one of the legendary days i am revisiting my old gone love , yes poetry writing
. Was keeping a bit nostalgic ever since got back after vacation and here i am composing another one of my league.
Appreciate your feedback and response

Nostalgia
Something in me, stings now and then,
Vigorously exhibiting characteristics of its own,
Leaving me in nothing but hankered state,
Clamorously softly, to elation, to intoxication
.
To the state of craving,
For one of those, carefree days,
Of endless innocence, of majestic immunity,
Far off selfish volitions, to unconditional love,
.
To the days, where life is, just a game,
To the days, where you are Troy, once again,
When all you get is smile n peck,
When all you do is just don’t care,
.
When worldly complications bar you off,
When you fly high, with your wings of thoughts,
For your dancing heart pays tribute to lord,
For the pleasantries you get, for each breath in,
.
It comes in flash and boom, it’s gone,
Before i could catch and hold it on,
Jaw dropped wow!, i stand amazed,
With a gush of rush, yes Adrenaline Rush!
.
Cheers thy enormity you stingy bite,
I savor each bit for roller ride,
Ironic as it may seem,
Perfect tequilla shot indeed!
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- Suneeta (Dated 20/03/10 )

Someone’s really feeling nostalgic!
You should get into a workshop – they keep those hibernations away… keep writing!!!
Good one… perfectly explains your mood….
Excellent poem. Keep up good work.
Nicely put. However, it doesn’t strike a chord. I feel you have written better than this earlier.
Put off the rust gathered and keep writing.
Cheers!!
BTW the picture is too good. Nicely framed and shot. Kudos!!
Thanks folks
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@ Siddharth : I agree .. does not rhyme much
suneeta you have turned such a new leaf….very well written..do keep me updated on this…cheers
good one…I feel nostalgic too..
very well written, i too think but to write in hindi..ll do it some day on net too..your follower..dil se
Beautiful..!!!
I recalled my old golden days..
Keep it up..!!
Nice One….!!
Nice one
Main shayar to nai ,magar aey nostalgia ,
tere wajah se shayari aa gayi ….
Suneeta gud poem ,keep writting!!!
Awesome one, i felt all my feelings in there. Its so true, and I feel like my other half has written it.
Keep writing and forwarding
Very nice poem!
Read and loved ur poem……
Truely the heart craves those dolce far niente…..
Thanks a lot folks … keep me inspired