One bright dawn
.
The bell has rung, filling me in with a flawless zing,
A bell, that sings, mystic rings,
Of twitter and chime,
In perfect rhyme,
.
The gust of breeze, in its gentle feel,
Touched me deep, inside within,
Soft and sweet, lukewarm feel,
Perfect pamper, as I feel,
.
The bright shining dawn rays,
Dancing at my door ways,
Winking, smiling, teasing, luring,
In all its magnanimous ways,
.
And that’s when I open my eyes,
Welcoming new days, arms open wide,
Governed by the aura, defined by the angles of time,
With hopes high mountains, in energy of fountains,
.
I there by call it, utopian sunshine!
.
- Suneeta (09/04/10)

Hey! nice one
Took you a while to wake up didn’t it : ) You should see our place. Yesterday night some truck guy was playing Kajra Re with the horn. No tender wake up calls for us !
@Bhavan : he he true
. Hope weekend brings in some light of hope for you
Good one
“The gust of breeze, in its gentle feel,
Touched me deep, inside within,
Soft and sweet, lukewarm feel,
Perfect pamper, as I feel”
—
The gentle caress of an early morning breeze is one that I get nostalgic about too often. Well put .. sweet one!!
Good one with positive shades..seems ur having a nice time these days.. [:D]
@All, thanks a lot ,
i think i should rework on this, sounds half cooked at broken at places
Nicely writte..!! Keep going girl..!!
Sunita:
Didn’t know about this hidden talent of yours. Great work. Very inspiring and soothing.
See if you like these — http://www.poetpatriot.com/poems-nature.htm
Keep up the good work and keep smiling
Wonderful..!.. Get going like this…
Wonderful poem…..
I read this poem and felt very soothing….